Wednesday, March 11, 2009
2nd Short Paper Intro
Art is important in every culture, even in "cyber" cultures that are based on the internet such as Second Life. The real world isn't the only place where museums, art galleries, and art shows exist. Second Life has a whole part of their economy that's based on art. Art viewing and art creating are in the top twenty things to do in Second Life. SL has a wide variety of art such as sculptures, paintings, and photos which can all be accessed through exploring the large selection of museums and art galleries.
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ok, few things...never use SL until you have put in parenthesis after the words are spelled out...any acronym or abbreviation should be done this way...also how do you know that art view and creation is among the top 20 things to do in sl? where did that come from? no citation...try to enhance this intro by maybe incorporating one or more of the galleries that you liked very much or why you have been drawn to art in sl in the first place...intro is not that engaging...revise and correct...
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